my first song.... "still"

yeiiiii...my first song...finnally done...

go a head klo mau download...itu juga klo mau...
nihhh link lagunya disini
mohon maap klo lagunya cengeng...
pengen bgt ngerekam lagu yang gak cengeng tapi gak punya peralatan ngeband...hiks

cuma bermodalkan gitar kopong jadul gw...trus sama headset, laptop, buku sama pulpen
oiya...lagu ini pure bikinan gw...not ngejiplak karya orang laen...
lagunya gw edit pake software music maker...
karena masih amateur dan peralatan seadanya...noisenya banyak banget,,,I'm so sorry

buat yang ngedengerin...tolong jangan muntah ataupun mules perutnya...
persiapkan mental dan fisik sebelum dengerin ini lagu....




Tittle : "still" 
it's my story in my life
sometimes my life blur and vague
but I still have you in my side

you always give me beautiful smile
and you offering shoulder to cry
always make me sure be fine

don't know what your thinkin up
now you leaving in my life
make me sad and cry so hard

I'm just human with no heart
Because my heart still in your side
how can I get to another one

Reff :
oh...I'm so hopeless
when you come and out from deep inside my heart
and make it broken fallin to a part

now...I'm so sadness
when the morning come when I wake my eyes
your shadow still keep exist and still smile

oohh god...I'm still in cry

komentar para pendengar :
- hahahahaaa....keren keren gung...walopun ga jelas liriknya...
tapi suara lu keren lah..serak2 kecekek gitu...
buat pemula .. lumayan..lanjutkeun...:D (Novi Purwaningsih)
- alah... pengucapan nomor dua yg penting berkarya, parahan juga english gw haha.... (Nofri E Prasetio)
- suka banget mas sm alunan gitarmu bikin melting... :'(
kritiknya, hehe..pronounciationnyah sdkt kurang jelas tp d reff plng akhir lumayan jelas krn suaranya kerasan x ya..btw ad backing vocalnya kan ya mas, klo bagi suara pst lbh asyik deh..hehe..
but well done mas, suka part yang ''oohh god...I'm still in cry..
suara lo serak2 becek gtu ya..hehe.. :)  (Nezia Sabrina Marbun)